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updated to point to new repo https://github.com/intel/intel-policy-library


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  • Updated the title from "Intel® Cloud Optimization Modules for Terraform" to "Intel® Optimized Cloud Modules for Terraform".
  • Changed the copyright year from 2022 to 2024.
  • Replaced the GCP VM module section with a new section on HashiCorp Sentinel Policies.
  • Added a detailed description of what Sentinel Policies are and how they can be used.
  • Provided references and links to the intel-policy-library for more information on Intel's Sentinel Policy Structure and recommended instance types.

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policies.md
Update policies documentation to reference new repository and Sentinel
Policies.

policies.md

  • Updated title and copyright year.
  • Replaced GCP VM module section with HashiCorp Sentinel Policies.
  • Added detailed description of Sentinel Policies.
  • Provided links to the intel-policy-library for further information.
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    @github-actions github-actions bot added the documentation Improvements or additions to documentation label May 28, 2024
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    PR Description updated to latest commit (8c279e9)

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    ⏱️ Estimated effort to review [1-5]

    2, because the changes are primarily textual updates in a Markdown file, which are straightforward to review. The changes involve updating titles, copyright years, and content sections, which do not require deep technical understanding or complex code review processes.

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    LGTM

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    PR Code Suggestions ✨

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    Enhancement
    Improve readability by formatting the description of Sentinel policies into a bulleted list

    The description of Sentinel policies is quite lengthy and could benefit from bullet points
    or a list to enhance readability and make the information more accessible.

    policies.md [13]

    -HashiCorp Sentinel is a policy as code framework that can be used to enforce policies and standards across an organization's infrastructure. It allows organizations to define rules for their infrastructure using a high-level language, and integrates with a variety of HashiCorp tools, including Terraform and Vault. Sentinel policies are defined using the Sentinel language, and can be used to enforce rules such as compliance requirements, security best practices, and cost optimization. Sentinel policies can be implemented at different stages of the infrastructure development lifecycle, deployment, and runtime.
    +HashiCorp Sentinel is a policy as code framework that can be used to enforce policies and standards across an organization's infrastructure:
    +- **Language**: Allows defining rules using a high-level language.
    +- **Integration**: Works with HashiCorp tools like Terraform and Vault.
    +- **Usage**: Enforces compliance, security best practices, and cost optimization.
    +- **Implementation**: Can be applied at various stages of the infrastructure lifecycle.
     
    Suggestion importance[1-10]: 9

    Why: This suggestion significantly improves readability and accessibility of the information, making it easier for readers to grasp key points quickly.

    9
    Standardize the format of external links for consistency

    Consider using a consistent format for external links. Currently, the link to the
    'intel-policy-library' is formatted as an inline link, while the Google Cloud link is
    provided as a plain URL. For better readability and consistency, format all external links
    in the same style.

    policies.md [17-23]

     Reference the `intel-policy-library` [README.md](https://github.com/intel/intel-policy-library/blob/main/README.md#getting-started) for details on how to get started using our policies.
    -<https://cloud.google.com/compute/docs/cpu-platforms>
    +[Google Cloud CPU Platforms](https://cloud.google.com/compute/docs/cpu-platforms)
     
    Suggestion importance[1-10]: 8

    Why: This suggestion improves readability and consistency, which is important for documentation. It addresses a minor issue but enhances the overall quality of the document.

    8
    Possible issue
    Clarify or revert the section title to match the content's scope

    The section title 'Intel® Optimized Cloud Modules for Terraform' has been changed to a
    more generic title. If the content specifically discusses Intel's optimized cloud modules,
    consider reverting to the original title or clarifying the scope of the content under this
    title to avoid confusion.

    policies.md [5]

    -# Intel® Optimized Cloud Modules for Terraform
    +# Intel® Cloud Optimization Modules for Terraform
     
    Suggestion importance[1-10]: 7

    Why: This suggestion helps clarify the scope of the content, which is important for reader understanding. However, it is not critical and depends on the actual content discussed under the title.

    7
    Verify and possibly correct the copyright year to match the actual status

    The copyright notice has been updated to 2024, but ensure that this update is intentional
    and correctly reflects the copyright status of the content, especially if parts of the
    document remain unchanged from previous versions.

    policies.md [7]

    -© Copyright 2024, Intel Corporation
    +© Copyright 2022, Intel Corporation
     
    Suggestion importance[1-10]: 6

    Why: This suggestion is important for legal accuracy, but it is a minor issue and likely a simple oversight. Verifying the correct year is crucial, but the impact is limited to the accuracy of the document.

    6

    @kevinbleckmann kevinbleckmann merged commit a9213ec into main May 28, 2024
    @kevinbleckmann kevinbleckmann deleted the may-update branch May 28, 2024 19:13
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